Villanelle Challenge

Write a villanelle using the two rhymes: /ɪŋ/ and /iː/.

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22 Responses to Villanelle Challenge

  1. Duyst Tuireletra says:

    “Lee, Key, and Candy”

    Because I’ve lost the Key
    Mommy tells me to bring
    So unfortunately

    “Go look for it! Quickly!”
    Mommy’s pissed, yelling
    Because I’ve lost the Key

    On a tree? In the sea?
    I keep on wandering
    So unfortunately

    “Are you lost? Little Lee”
    “Not me,” said I, crying
    “Because I’ve lost the Key”

    “On that tree? In that sea?”
    A mister keeps asking
    So unfortunately

    “Come here, lil’ Lee; I’ll give you a Candy”
    I follow him into his house, smiling
    Because I’ve lost the Key
    “So unfortunate… Lee”

    • Leo T. says:

      Writing a villanelle is easy
      One can write almost anything
      Still, it requires creativity

      Just put in words randomly
      One can talk about anything
      Writing a villanelle is easy

      Alternating lines repeatedly
      One could say it is boring
      Still, it requires creativity

      Nineteen lines, done mindlessly
      One could say it is time-wasting
      Writing a villanelle is easy

      Just two rhymes, yes, really!
      One could say it is conforming
      Still, it requires creativity

      Here’s an interesting story
      You might hear some poet saying
      Writing a villanelle is easy
      Still, it requires creativity

  2. kamplaa says:

    “Two Dazzling Rings”

    So I gave you my everything
    My soul, my youth, my love, entirely
    When you gave me one dazzling ring

    The moon in your eyes seemed promising
    And it beamed bright just inside me
    So I gave you my everything

    Then waltz, jive, tango, we went dancing
    Swung and swayed around in glee
    When you gave me one dazzling ring

    You used to be so gentle, so nice, so loving
    And the moon in your eyes promised to always be
    So I gave you my everything

    Then the papers took away my wings
    As the vows took away my liberty
    When you gave me one dazzling ring

    Now for freedom, my heart is crying
    But I know the rings wouldn’t let me free
    So I gave you my everything
    When you gave me one dazzling ring

  3. Natasha Ysily Rundstof says:

    “We Don’t Talk Anymore”

    And there’s no more our talking
    Since we talk nothing recently
    So stop, stop all wishing, dreaming and waiting

    You were on the ground, sitting
    I walked into the hall, slowly
    And there’s no more our talking

    You asked me out for a movie watching
    I was excited, accepted willingly
    So stop, stop all wishing, dreaming and waiting

    I asked you out for a movie, thrilling
    You asked me out to buy things for your mommy
    And there’s no more our talking

    I decided to say straightforwardly, my feeling
    You said you feel, sometimes, something, honestly
    So stop, stop all wishing, dreaming and waiting

    Just act normally like before, you were saying
    I’ve tried but I couldn’t handle this easily
    And there’s no more our talking
    So stop, stop all wishing, dreaming and waiting

  4. Dearing says:

    “(Do not) Love at First Sight”

    Love at first sight torments us so much, can you see?
    Because you can’t cope with, can’t handle anything
    But, why do you still crave for that! Along with that glee!

    You walk into the love’s realm, thinking to be “free”
    Then know you’ve traipsed into uncertainty, crying!
    Love at first sight torments us so much, can you see?

    You’re now fleeing, promising you truly won’t be
    Saddened of this contend’d decision, be chilling!
    But, why do you still crave for that! Along with that glee!

    You were told not to love at first sight; she or he
    Will destructively pleasingly leave you hanging.
    Love at first sight torments us so much, can you see?

    Instruct’d and learn’d, you think you won’t fall into wee
    Value of love at first sight, so no more trying.
    But, why do you still crave for that! Along with that glee!

    How hypocritical you are! You ruthlessly
    Tell everyone and yourself, to be reminding
    Love at first sight torments us so much, can you see?
    But, why do you still crave for that! Along with that glee!

    By Dearing 🙂

  5. Rosaline says:

    What is love’s meaning?
    Is it the happiness to care for someone so tenderly?
    Or the pain that can make us heartbreaking?

    What is love’s meaning?
    Is it a romantic story?
    Or a grievous tragedy so devastating?

    What is love’s meaning?
    Is it the key that sets us free?
    Or the cage that locks us up with its menacing?

    What is love’s meaning?
    Is it that loud sound of heartbeat physically?
    Or the peaceful silence of everything?

    Is love really an ending?
    Is it a happy ending of the story?
    Or the new episode just beginning?

    Is being in love like being among rose blooming?
    With its red petal, beautiful but tricky
    It can give us the joyous feeling
    But can it send us to death? I’m doubting

  6. Try This Art says:

    Yes and No

    Yes, executive order, I am issuing
    To bar entrance to migrants and refugees.
    No, it is against the constitution to do such a thing!

    Migrants have been threatening
    Our law and order, and our democracy.
    Yes, executive order, I am issuing.

    At airports, immigration officers are detaining
    Foreigners and innocent citizens. You are crazy.
    No, it is against the constitution to do such a thing!

    To make this nation great again, I have been promising.
    For prosperity and national security!
    Yes, executive order, I am issuing.

    Our ideal is to be the land for those “yearning
    To breath free. ”
    No, it is against the constitution to do such a thing!

    Why not give executive order to stop bombing
    Other lands; with peace, one needs not flee.

    Yes, executive order, I am issuing.
    No, it is against the constitution to do such a thing!

    “Try This Art” Feb 7th 2017

  7. Near Due says:

    ขอเวลาให้ฉันอีกหนึ่งปี
    งานปฏิรูปนี้ขับเคลื่อนมิหยุดนิ่ง
    บอกเธอเสมอเสมอนะเชื่อใจบ้างซี
    วันเวลาหมุนไปไม่รอรี
    ทุกชีวีใส่เกียร์ห้าออกท้าซิ่ง
    ขอเวลาให้ฉันอีกหนึ่งปี
    แม้มีวาจาว่าร้ายป้ายสี
    กำลังใจยังดีสู้ไม่ทิ้ง
    บอกเธอเสมอเสมอนะเชื่อใจบ้างซี
    อุปสรรคมากมายมิหน่ายหนี
    ชีวิตพลีเพื่อชาติด้วยสัตย์จริง
    ขอเวลาให้ฉันอีกหนึ่งปี
    ตามแผนงานการเลือกตั้งจะต้องมี
    ไม่ต้องจี้ไม่ต้องเตือนไม่อ้อยอิ่ง
    บอกเธอเสมอเสมอนะเชื่อใจบ้างซี
    เสร็จสิ้นภารกิจคิดจรลี
    นาฑีนี้อย่าเกรงกริ่งไม่ประวิง
    ขอเวลาให้ฉันอีกหนึ่งปี
    บอกเธอเสมอเสมอนะเชื่อใจบ้างซี

  8. Dusty Shingle says:

    วางเถิดวาง ไปเบาๆ ไปดีๆ
    น้อมใจสู่พระธรรมนำจิตนิ่ง
    สุขแท้จริงอยู่ที่ความไม่มี

    ยศถาบรรดาศักดิ์ สังขารนี้
    ล้วนหนักหนาถ้าแบกหามไปทุกส่ิง
    วางเถิดวาง ไปเบาๆ ไปดีๆ

    โดนนินทา ประสบทุกข์ เสืื่อมศักดิ์ศรี
    ใจจึงหมองเพราะใจไร้ที่พิง
    สุขแท้จริงอยู่ที่ความไม่มี

    รู้ใช่ไหม แล้วใยจึงติดมี
    ทั้งแก้วแหวนสรรพสมบัติ โลภะสิง
    วางเถิดวาง ไปเบาๆ ไปดีๆ

    สระสนานกายจิตปลิดราคี
    พ้นกิเลสที่ชักใจให้วนวิ่ง
    สุขแท้จริงอยู่ที่ความไม่มี

    ละเถิดละโลกธรรมคู่ทั้งสี่
    สุขแท้จริงอยู่ที่เลิกฉกชิง
    วางเถิดวาง ไปเบาๆ ไปดีๆ
    สุขแท้จริงอยู่ที่ความไม่มี

  9. Thirsty Rat says:

    Privacy Is Liberty

    Run, Edward, Run, to be free you must flee
    Fast, Edward, fast, the birds of prey are approaching
    Run for your life and our liberty.

    It is courageous to think less of your own safety
    The Paul Revere of today sounds his warning
    Run, Edward, Run, to be free you must flee

    The bureaucrats in the name of national security
    Heartless, faceless, after you they are searching
    Run for your life and our liberty

    We want to keep our rights to privacy
    Thank you for the message you bring
    Run, Edward, Run, to be free you must flee

    Freedom fighters everywhere stand by to carry
    You through quietly. They are helping.
    Run for your life and our liberty.

    The torch of freedom will cast a shadow on tyranny
    To ideals and values of a great country we must cling
    Run, Edward, Run, to be free you must flee
    Run for your life and our liberty.

  10. Lt. Aldo Raine says:

    Come closer, I want to show you a thing.
    I’m sure you’ll be more than happy.
    Do not afraid, do not hesitate.

    It looks alive, but cool as freezing.
    Alive like sunshine, fresh like rainy.
    Come closer, I want to show you a thing.

    It is now sitting, but feel like running.
    No cage can keep it steady.
    Do not afraid, do not hesitate.

    It is coming, as fast as it leaving.
    It is fast like thunder, but if you take it easy;
    Come closer, I want to show you a thing.

    Hurry! It starts to get going.
    Not many chances like this, assuredly.
    Do not afraid, do not hesitate.

    Now it’s time. Don’t blink or you’ll be missing.
    Good girl, step out and grab it, firmly and calmly.
    Come closer, I want to show you a thing.
    Do not afraid, do not hesitate.

  11. Lanyassi says:

    Do not take my wonderful thought seriously.
    I would love to see people dating.
    No! No! you cannot rely on this, sweetie!

    Girls think her puppy love is rosy,
    Like all the songs they love to sing.
    Do not take my wonderful thought seriously.

    My thought is that these girls are sickly,
    Think the world is like romantic books she’s reading.
    No! No! you cannot rely on this, sweetie!

    This world is full of things unpleasantly,
    Unlike the things they would take for living.
    Do not take my wonderful thought seriously.

    Don’t you come to live in the real world, baby!
    The place where sadness and truth being.
    No! No! you cannot rely on this, sweetie!

    Well! you can be where you want to be..
    You can believe in whatever you’re thinking.
    Do not take my wonderful thought seriously.
    No! No! you cannot rely on this, sweetie!

  12. Syta Seth says:

    Colours

    How many colours will make you see
    That my heart is pouring
    with love for thee!

    As blue as the ocean, oh wild sea!
    Forever will my love be gushing
    How many colours will make you see

    As bright as the yellow on a bee,
    will I be beaming
    with love for thee!

    As pink as the flower on a tree
    My heart will be blooming
    Will all those colours make you see?

    As white as a cloud, sitting there so purely
    For when I’m with you, I’m flying
    with love for thee!

    As colourful as the rainbow, I am with glee.
    Arching, swaying, yearning
    How many colours will make you see
    I am filled with love for thee!

    Syta Seth.

  13. Lara Rey says:

    Ever since he said ‘let it be’
    All my hopes started shrinking
    Yet I know it would set me free

    I used to believe that our days were lovely
    Never thought that the gloomy day was approaching
    Ever since he said ‘let it be’

    We are not the same as we used to be
    Accentuated by the way he said ‘we were nothing’
    I know, maybe, it would set me free

    I feel like I gave him a key
    To enter my soul and take away my wings
    Ever since he said ‘let it be’

    I opened our box silently
    Looked at our memories and burned everything
    I believe it would set me free

    It feels like he’s cutting a part of me slowly
    I can barely scream or speak but keep sinking
    Ever since he said ‘let it be’
    Yet I know it would set me free

  14. Reutartil says:

    I am traveling.
    In a summer night under the sky so starry.
    Far, far away I hope to know where I’m heading.

    Took a night train to the place unknown, wondering what future will bring.
    Even in the middle of nowhere I don’t feel worry.
    I am traveling.

    In my head trains of thoughts are arriving then departing.
    So swiftly that I feel a bit dizzy.
    Far, far away I hope to know where I’m heading.

    I see sea of different faces; some sleeping, some laughing, some grieving.
    There’s only one I recognize from my reverie.
    I am traveling.

    Clickety-clack, the train is rumbling
    It will stop somewhere soon definitely.
    Far, far away I hope to know where I’m heading.

    Back in my mind there’s no way to escape from this loop, I’m dying.
    That one face seems not fade eternally.
    I am traveling.
    Far, far away I hope to know where I’m heading.

  15. Dusty Rof says:

    Everyday of my life was so bright.
    Woke up from a sleep dreaming,
    Since the day I’ve met you, lovely.

    Got some breeze and went out to see
    her dress full of wonder, delighting.
    Everyday of my life was so bright.

    The perfume from the flower, namely
    Lily, has been my perfect inspiring.
    Since the day I’ve met you, lovely.

    The sun shone on the river so vividly
    that I could see no more sighting.
    Everyday of my life was so bright.

    I tried to look at you again, my honey.
    But the light was everywhere, obscuring.
    Since the day I’ve met you, lovely.

    Wearing sunglasses like a blind, why me?
    Nothing was matter. merely I staying.
    Everyday of my life was so bright.
    Since the day I’ve met you, lonely.

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